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    So, I was sad, heartbroken and dejected. Look what came out of it:

    Have you seen those memes, who make fun of kids / teens crying because they broke up with someone or the person who they liked rejected them, and they act like they'll never find someone else? Even when, it is possible, they weren't even close to truly loving that person? I always laughed a lot when I saw them.

    After all, they have all their lives ahead of them, what the hell are they doing suffering for a person, when there are 7 billion people in the world? Yeah, I thought they were stupid.

    Then I met you. And, well, if they were stupid, I had retardation and autism combined.

    I had never wanted anyone so much. And neither did I think it was possible to want so much in the first place.

    And, even though we had many problems (My nerves, inexperience, the ... "Dilemma" with that person, etc), when it was midnight, and we were still talking, telling each other our secrets, and joking, I was happy. Everything we had to deal with could go to hell. You made me happy, and that was all that mattered.

    Then, 2017 got here, and I started to love you even more, and to be happier.

    Honestly, I always thought that the idea of ​​seeing the same person for the rest of your life would be monotonous, and that I would end up getting bored. That the "love" would end, so to speak.

    With you ... spending the rest of my life waking up next to you, well, it didn't sound boring. Instead, it made me extremely happy.

    But fate didn't want it to be that way.

    And, in some way, I do not think either of us is to blame for how things ended.

    Have you heard the saying, "If two people are meant to be together, no matter how much time passes or who wants to avoid it, in the end they will be together"?

    Yeah, well, it's true.

    The saying is true, although it doesn't apply to us.... It never did.

    But I'm stubborn, damn it. I don't like to give up. If I see even the slightest light at the end of the tunnel, I will continue to run towards it.

    After all, hope is the last thing you lose, isn't it?

    But, I guess I should go against that habit. The light went out, long ago. The only thing that is still alight are my illusions, waiting for what will never come.

    And, like yesterday, I'll run away from what would shut down my illusions, and would tell me that I should move on with my life.

    And I will keep on like this, I don't know for how long.

    I remember seeing a picture a while ago, I think it described perfectly how I feel, but I didn't download it and despite looking for it I didn't find it. It went something like this:

    "I can lose everything, fucking everything.

    But not you.

    God...

    Not you."
    "You are not prepared!"


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    Stop being a pussy
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    You know, I think I'm starting to like Rax better.
    "You are not prepared!"


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    You're some random person on an internet forum, I have zero care what you think of you. I don't care what IRL people think of me most of the time.

    I said "stop being a pussy" because that is what you're being in my eyes.

    Instead of spending time writing this allowing you wallow in your own sadness you could've spent that time writing something specifically to her. But instead you chose to be sad.

    Being sad after a breakup isn't unmanly, how you go about acting after a breakup is.

    Either you put in some effort to get her back, or you man up and move on. You don't sit around asking for others to wallow around in your own pain with you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by McCree View Post
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    You're some random person on an internet forum, I have zero care what you think of you. I don't care what IRL people think of me most of the time.

    I said "stop being a pussy" because that is what you're being in my eyes.

    Instead of spending time writing this allowing you wallow in your own sadness you could've spent that time writing something specifically to her. But instead you chose to be sad.

    Being sad after a breakup isn't unmanly, how you go about acting after a breakup is.

    Either you put in some effort to get her back, or you man up and move on. You don't sit around asking for others to wallow around in your own pain with you.
    This is something I sent to her, though.

    She spent the next hour laughing about it and saying how I'm incapable of realizing how there's no way in hell that she would feel even close to the same.

    Thanks for reminding me.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Caves View Post
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    She spent the next hour laughing about it and saying how I'm incapable of realizing how there's no way in hell that she would feel even close to the same.
    Fuck that man, you don't need that shit in your life. Good riddance.

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    Then she isn't worth your time.

    If she doesn't want you there is nothing you can do.

    Still doesn't mean you need to post it here to get sympathy.

    Acting as if you don't like her anymore will be the best course of action now though, don't give her the satisfaction. Not so much you don't care about her but that you've accepted that the relationship is over.

    Acting like a man and not like a bitch is gonna be the best way win her over is the jyst.
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    You're freaking 16 you brat Focus on being a great person not on some pussy.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dellinger View Post
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    You're freaking 16 you brat Focus on being a great person not on some pussy.
    Who says I can't do both?

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    Then she isn't worth your time.

    If she doesn't want you there is nothing you can do.

    Still doesn't mean you need to post it here to get sympathy.

    Acting as if you don't like her anymore will be the best course of action now though, don't give her the satisfaction. Not so much you don't care about her but that you've accepted that the relationship is over.

    Acting like a man and not like a bitch is gonna be the best way win her over is the jyst.
    I did.

    This thing is like a month or two old.

    I just liked what I wrote and thought why not share it.

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    Fuck that man, you don't need that shit in your life. Good riddance.
    "You are not prepared!"


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    Quote Originally Posted by Caves View Post
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    Who says I can't do both?

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    I did.

    This thing is like a month or two old.

    I just liked what I wrote and thought why not share it.
    Focusing on a girl will just hold you back on many things.Trust me on that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dellinger View Post
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    Focusing on a girl will just hold you back on many things.Trust me on that.
    I have noticed, yeah.

    I lost a great deal of good things this year.
    "You are not prepared!"


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    Take the sadness and make something good from it.

    If you want true advice, dont act as someone you are not just to "fit", be yourself and you will fit.
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    Your first mistake was telling to McCree

    Your second mistake was not accepting friendship


    Through dream I travel, at lantern's call
    To consume the flames of a kingdom's fall

    Your friendship?
    I'll take it!


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    Take it from someone who gets hoes, never send this to any girl ever again. You failed to guard your reputation which is the most important thing growing up over some pussy. It's not some beautiful poetry or message, this is some sappy, cringe-inducing cry for attention that she will use as leverage to sabotage you or show to her friends to laugh at.

    I'm not being a dick. I'm giving you cold hard facts of life. Don't fuck up before its too late, romeo only gets serious when he needs to be

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    What the fuck is going on here did I log in the wrong forum

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    @Caves;

    I actually think this piece is well written. I would completely restructure it though into a poem, and make it more vague so it can apply to anyone, and not just necessarily you. I'd also put a lot of enjambment so that a lot of lines can take on double meanings. Lastly, this piece needs a title. Just a rough example below:

    Quote Originally Posted by Caves View Post
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    [That Someone (Temporary title)]
    Teens, mere children
    crying
    rejected, they act
    like they'll never find someone,
    someone else.
    Even when,
    it is possible,
    they weren't even close
    to truly loving that someone?
    I always laughed, a lot
    when I saw them.

    They have their lives
    ahead of them,
    what are they doing
    suffering
    for someone,
    when there are 7 billion "someones" in the world?
    I thought they were stupid.

    Then I met you. And,
    if they were stupid,
    I had retardation and autism combined.

    I had never
    wanted, someone
    anyone, so much.
    I did not think it was possible
    to want
    so much in the first place.

    And, even though
    we had many problems,
    my nerves,
    inexperience,
    the ... "Dilemma" with that person,
    when it was midnight,
    and we were still talking,
    telling each other our secrets,
    and joking,
    I was happy.
    Everything we had
    to deal with
    could go to hell.
    You made me happy,
    and that was all that mattered.

    Then, I started to love you even more,
    and to be happier.

    I always thought that the
    idea of ​​seeing
    the same someone
    for the rest of my life
    would be monotonous.
    I would end up getting bored.
    The "love" would end.

    With you ...
    spending the rest of my life
    waking up next to you, well,
    it didn't sound boring.
    Instead, it made me extremely happy.

    But fate didn't want it to be that way.

    And, in some way,
    I do not think
    either of us is
    to blame for how things ended.

    "If two people are meant to be together,
    no matter how much time passes
    or who wants to avoid it,
    in the end
    they will be together"?

    Have you heard that saying?
    Yeah, well, it's true.

    But it doesn't apply to us....
    It never did.

    But I'm stubborn.
    I don't like to give up.
    If I see even the slightest light
    at the end of the tunnel,
    I will continue to run towards it.

    After all, hope
    is the last thing
    you lose,
    isn't it?

    But, the light went
    out, long ago.
    The only thing still alight
    are my illusions, waiting
    for what will never come.

    And, like yesterday,
    I'll run away
    from what would extinguish
    my illusions,
    and would tell me
    I should move on with my life.
    And I will keep on like this,
    I don't know for how long.

    "I can lose everything,
    fucking everything.
    But not you.
    God...
    Not you."
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    Take it from someone who gets hoes, never send this to any girl ever again. You failed to guard your reputation which is the most important thing growing up over some pussy. It's not some beautiful poetry or message, this is some sappy, cringe-inducing cry for attention that she will use as leverage to sabotage you or show to her friends to laugh at.

    I'm not being a dick. I'm giving you cold hard facts of life. Don't fuck up before its too late, romeo only gets serious when he needs to be
    @Caves; romeo is abosolutely right. I hate to admit this, but I was one of those girls. love letters always make me assume the guy was a creep, and I would show all my friends and laugh about it. Now excuse me while I go contemplate how mean that was.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nikamara View Post
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    @Caves;

    I actually think this piece is well written. I would completely restructure it though into a poem, and make it more vague so it can apply to anyone, and not just necessarily you. I'd also put a lot of enjambment so that a lot of lines can take on double meanings. Lastly, this piece needs a title. Just a rough example below:



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    @Caves; romeo is abosolutely right. I hate to admit this, but I was one of those girls. love letters always make me assume the guy was a creep, and I would show all my friends and laugh about it. Now excuse me while I go contemplate how mean that was.
    Thanks for the compliment in my writing!

    I can't believe you're the only one that got the purpose of the thread

    Actually, I do have a title for it. I have several parts written, in fact. I just didn't post them cause of the "lol cringy faggot" comments I'd get.

    You can talk Spanish, right? Maybe I'll pm you the parts. They're all on Wattpadd (Spanish only, though).

    Also, that's, uh... Kind of the thing. She used to really like whenever I wrote or talked to her about this kind of stuff. That's why it hurt when she dismissed this one so easily.

    She had told me several times it "made her feel special".

    Turns out it wasn't special enough.
    "You are not prepared!"


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    Quote Originally Posted by Caves View Post
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    Thanks for the compliment in my writing!

    I can't believe you're the only one that got the purpose of the thread

    Actually, I do have a title for it. I have several parts written, in fact. I just didn't post them cause of the "lol cringy faggot" comments I'd get.

    You can talk Spanish, right? Maybe I'll pm you the parts. They're all on Wattpadd (Spanish only, though).

    Also, that's, uh... Kind of the thing. She used to really like whenever I wrote or talked to her about this kind of stuff. That's why it hurt when she dismissed this one so easily.

    She had told me several times it "made her feel special".

    Turns out it wasn't special enough.
    I'm not fluent actually. I usually just get by on broken spanish.
    maybe she was "that kind of special" :x

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nikamara View Post
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    I'm not fluent actually. I usually just get by on broken spanish.
    maybe she was "that kind of special" :x
    Oh
    "You are not prepared!"


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    I was being kind of a dick for being blunt but I wasn't wrong.
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