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    Create a Servant

    With class skills NP and everything

    If anything I'll be using this alot to throw in quick ideas.

    (My) Template:

    Class:

    • Alternate Classes:


    Name:
    Place of Origin:
    Alignment:
    Comment:


    Parameters:
    Strength:
    Agility:
    Endurance:
    Magic:
    Luck:
    Noble Phantasm:

    Class Skills:

    • 1


    Personal Skills:

    • 1


    Noble Phantasm:

    Lore:

    Background 1:

    Background 2:

    etc.
    ________________________

    Muh Guidelines:

    1). The Gilgamesh Rule
    Gilgamesh is the most powerful servant. End of. Canon says so. He is the first and the best. If your servant is stronger, something has gone wrong.

    Keep track with all the canonical heavy hitters: Karna, Enkidu, Scathach, Ozy etc These guys are the creme of the crop. So unless you have legitimate reasoning for doing so, don't make them stronger than these guys.

    2). The Cu Chulainn Rule
    Cu has pretty average stats. So why is it that he consistently does better than those more notably stronger than him? His impressive set of personal skills. His combination of Battle Continuation, Disengage and other skills made even Gilgamesh take half a day to put him down for good. Even Heracles and Achilles don't have more than him.

    As such; when making your servant, try having a maximum of four personal skills. No more than five. If in the event of you having more than five you can either remove the less known/relevant skills or simply create a new 'cheat' skill that acts as an amalgamation such as 'Expert of Many Specialisations', 'Wisdom of Divine Gift', 'Imperial Privilege' or 'Voyager of the Storm'.

    3). The Perseus Rule
    Most Heroic Spirits have one or two Noble Phantasm's to act as the manifestation of their legend. Some have in rarer cases even three. However, these individuals have a legacy behind them and thus a legitimate excuse for having that many. Perseus has five Noble Phantasms that were given to him by the gods to slay the Gorgon and this was stated to be a ridiculously high number.

    Therefore your servant should never have more than five Noble Phantasms. And remember, Perseus and Astolfo have very low parameters to compensate for these.

    4). The EX Rule
    When the EX rank was first introduced, it was something so powerful it could not be quantified. It was reserved for the ridiculously overpowered and game-breaking servants. It's understandable that you want to make your strong characters strong but an EX ranking is not always required to do so.

    When making EX ranked things reserve them for the most powerful of weapons and concepts. Something powerful enough to slay gods, reseting time, embodying a concept and defying laws of reality. Remember that Excalibur, the most famous legendary sword in the world is A++. If you throw EX rankings around as you please it becomes more difficult to take everything into consideration.
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    This is pretty good, I'll do this once I get home.

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    Ooh ll try and cook one up here soon then


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    I'll attempt this after I take a nap. Going to use Charlemagne.

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    I'll attempt this after I take a nap. Going to use Charlemagne.
    The rapper

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    Keep in mind I'm not going to restrict any of you guys to actual historical/mythological characters.

    You're free to use stuff from a fictional series or even originals. Would kind of beat the purpose if I did.


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    There's a rapper named that too? I thought their was only the radio guy. Can't say I'm a fan of his.

    I automatically figured it was restricted to actual legends and historical figures. Johan Liebert would be quite the heroic spirit. He'd just convince all the other servants and their masters to kill one another.

    Sticking with Charlemagne though, I think he'd be a pretty strong servant. One or two of the legendary warriors/paladins that served under him are heroic spirits already.
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    There's a rapper named that too? I thought their was only the radio guy. Can't say I'm a fan of his.

    I automatically figured it was restricted to actual legends and historical figures. Johan Liebert would be quite the heroic spirit. He'd just convince all the other servants and their masters to kill one another.
    Yeah I meant that one.

    Johan from Monster? That would be cool.

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    Class: Berserker
    Name: Cthulu
    Place of Origin: R'lyeh is a sunken lost city in the South Pacific and the prison of the entity called Cthulhu.
    Alignment: Chaotic evil
    Comment/Lore:Cthulhu is a monstrous entity who lies "dead but dreaming" in the city of R'lyeh, a place of non-Euclidean madness presently (and mercifully) sunken below the depths of the Pacific Ocean. Cthulhu appears in various monstrous and demonic forms in early myths of the human race. Racial memory preserves Him as humanity's most basic nightmare. Cthulhu is the high priest of the Great Old Ones, unnatural alien beings who ruled the Earth before humanity formed, worshipped as gods by some misguided people. It is said that They will return, causing worldwide insanity and mindless violence before finally displacing humanity forever.

    Parameters:
    Strength:
    Agility:
    Endurance:
    Magic:
    Luck:
    Noble Phantasm:

    Class skills:

    Personal skills:

    Last edited by Derylsharpe; 05-16-2016 at 09:43 AM.

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    Class: Assasin
    Name: Chrysaor "The Golden Sword" "He who has a Golden Sword"
    Place of Origin: Chrysaor and Pegasus were said to be born from the drops of Medusa's blood that fell in the sea; others say that they sprang from Medusa's neck as Perseus beheaded her, a "higher" birth (such as the birth of Athena from the head of Zeus). Chrysaor is said to have been king of Iberia.
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Comment:Married to Callirrhoe, daughter of gloriousOceanus, was father to the triple-headed Geryon, but Geryon was killed by the great strength of Heracles at sea-circled Erytheis beside his own shambling cattle on that day when Heracles drove those broad-faced cattle toward holy Tiryns, when he crossed the stream of Okeanos and had killed Orthos and the oxherd Eurytionout in the gloomy meadow beyond fabulous Oceanos.

    Parameters:
    Strength: A
    Agility: B++
    Endurance: D+
    Magic: C
    Luck: C++
    Noble Phantasm: A++

    Class Skill:
    Territory Creation EX
    by gathering enough mana it is possible to summon the holyland "Iberia"

    Prescence Concealment B
    Becomes one with the earth itself. The moment one shifts to attack it becomes C+
    Personal Skill:

    Noble Phantasm:
    The Golden Sword
    Callirhoe
    Anti-Unit Noble Phantasm
    C++
    The Golden Sword Callirhoe is an extremely powerful long sword which is bestowed upon Chrysaor by Medusa upon her death, bearing her curse.
    Holyland
    Iberia

    Fortress Noble Phantasm
    E~EX
    By gathering enough Mana Chrysaor summons the Holyland Iberia, a massive stronghold similar in nature to a Reality Marble. The durability of the fortress rises with the rank and can only be pierced by a Noble Phantasm of higher rank
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    Really wanted to do Joan of arc, but she's already been done.

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    Class: Ruler

    • Alternate Classes: Avenger (post-Apple)


    Name: Eve
    Place of Origin: Book of Genesis
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    Comment:


    Parameters:
    Strength: D+++*
    Agility: A
    Endurance: D
    Magic: B
    Luck: A+
    Noble Phantasm: EX

    Class Skills:

    • God's Resolution A
      privilege of the Ruler presiding over the Holy Grail War. Each Ruler is normally granted two Command Spells for each Servant that participates in the Holy Grail War.
    • Magic Resistance B


    Personal Skills:

    • Clairvoyance A
    • Divine Protection EX*
      is a form of divine protection that gives the user the quick-wittedness and the brute strength needed to defeat beasts unaided.
    • Divinity B (E-)
      is the measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster, Demonic Beast raises. It can also decrease due one's dislike for the gods. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called "purge defense" in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig. Due to going against the Word of God, Rank has decreased drastically.
    • Revelation A
      is a Skill equivalent to Instinct, a sixth sense regarding battles; however, "Revelation" accommodates all matters related to the achievement of a goal (for instance, choosing the most suitable path while traveling). Because there is no basis to it, it cannot be explained to others clearly.


    Noble Phantasm:

    Garden of Eden
    Forbidden Everdistant Utopia

    Rank: EX
    Type: Anti-Unit (Bounded Field)

    Reality Marble. Unlike most bounded fields, it overwrites reality only for a couple meters outside the users current location - forging the effect of two worlds intertwining at the edge, a bizarre sight that is hard to describe - like gazing into the sky from the bottom of a well. Anyone - or anything that is not allowed to enter it "fades away" upon contact - a rejection of the entity coming from the "world" itself. The ultimate effect beeing the victim beeing able to interact less and less with the world surrounding him, (alter it through actions or force, requiring more and more force to achieve effects, a sword slash might phase through most things, leaving only minor scratchmarks) the longer he is exposed to it, signified by gaining more and more visible transparency. Excessive exposure is the same as never having existed in the first place. It's the manifestation of the tale that only two men were ever allowed to enter gods realm.


    Just trying something.
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    Class: Lancer

    • Alternate Classes: Archer


    Name: "Bahr Negasi" - Teo
    Place of Origin: Barbados
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Comment: Perhaps the most storied figure out of the familiarly nicknamed "Buffalo Soldiers" aptly dubbed so out of respect for their fierce fighting abilities. Later nicknamed "King of the Sea" - for conquering mythical Sea God Neptune.

    Parameters:

    Strength: A
    Agility: B
    Endurance: C
    Magic: C
    Luck: D
    Noble Phantasm: A+

    Class Skills: Magic Resistance

    • 1 - Grants protection against magical effects to a limited extent by rejecting magical energy.


    Personal Skills: Dead Eye

    • 1 - Expert marksmanship. Considered lightning fast on the draw. Regarded as one of the most skilled gunslingers. Killed "Billy the Kid" with a single bullet from 100 meters away.


    Noble Phantasm: Neptune's Trident

    Rank: A+
    Type: Anti-Fortress

    Lore: In his time revered as a great hero that helped soldiers break from the oppressive rule of Neptune and colonization of Bim. Somewhere in Barbados lies his body in a state of suspended animation in a hidden location. Some say he's located in the waters of Bathsheba beach, others in Harrison's Cave - located in the central uplands of the islands; others still claim him to be simply a myth, a child's bedtime story. It is said that he will awaken once again if his people are ever in need.
    R O C K S T A R

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    Class: Rider


    Alternate Classes: Saber

    Name: Knútr inn ríki - Canute The Great/Knud Den Store
    Place of Origin: Denmark
    Alignment: lawful good


    Comment:
    Cnut the Great (Old Norse: Knútr inn ríki; c. 995 - 12 November 1035), more commonly known as Canute, was a king of Denmark, England and Norway, together often referred to as the Anglo-Scandinavian or North Sea Empire. After his death, the deaths of his heirs within a decade, and the Norman conquest of England in 1066, his legacy was largely lost to history. The medieval historian Norman Cantor has stated that he was "the most effective king in Anglo-Saxon history", although Cnut himself was Danish, not British or Anglo-Saxon.


    Parameters:
    Strength: B
    Agility: C+
    Endurance: C+
    Magic/Mana: D+
    Luck: E
    Noble Phantasm: A+ ~ A++


    Class Skills:


    1: Magic Resistance - D
    2: Riding - A+




    Personal Skills:


    1: Pioneer of the Stars: A

    Pioneer of the Stars (星の開拓者, Hoshi no Kaitaku-Sha?, localized as "Settler of the Stars") is the unique Skill given to heroes that became turning points in the human history. All difficult voyages and challenges which are considered "impossible" turn into "events

    2: Incitment: A


    Incitement (扇動, Sendō?) is a skill that functions as the acquisition of the words and gestures to lead the citizens and the masses. Especially, when employed against an individual, it functions as a sort of mental attack.



    3: Military-Tactics: B


    Military Tactics (軍略, Gunryaku?) is tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.

    4: Charisma: B+




    Charisma (カリスマ, Karisuma?) is the natural talent to command an army. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class. It is said that a rank of B in this skill is sufficient to lead a nation as its King.

    Noble Phantasm:
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    1: Tre-Kongedømme-Krone: B+
    Type: Anti-Army
    2: Skandinavia herlighet: A++
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    3: Hestr: E




    Lore:


    Background 1:


    Background 2:


    etc.



    I'll probaply make some changes later and explain most of the NPs

    but @Y; What do you Think about this one
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    is there a reason for E rank luck?


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    Quote Originally Posted by Y View Post
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    is there a reason for E rank luck?
    Yeah it said in several stories about him that he was a person with atrociously bad luck which he wasn't affected by because of his amazing intellect or so most stories go


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    Quote Originally Posted by Featherine Waifu AuAurora View Post
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    Yeah it said in several stories about him that he was a person with atrociously bad luck which he wasn't affected by because of his amazing intellect or so most stories go
    Poor guy.

    Container Str End Agi Man Luk
    Saber A B B C D
    Archer C C C E E
    Lancer B C A D E
    Rider D D B C E
    Caster E E C A B
    Berserker C D D E E
    Assassin D D B E B

    Yeah.. the containers not gonna do much for him there either.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Y View Post
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    Poor guy.

    Container Str End Agi Man Luk
    Saber A B B C D
    Archer C C C E E
    Lancer B C A D E
    Rider D D B C E
    Caster E E C A B
    Berserker C D D E E
    Assassin D D B E B

    Yeah.. the containers not gonna do much for him there either.


    By container do you mean magic


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    Quote Originally Posted by Featherine Waifu AuAurora View Post
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    By container do you mean magic
    Naw.


    They're so called Container Parameters, unmodified by the strengths and weaknesses of specific Heroic Spirits, the containers of the seven standard Servant classes of the Fuyuki Grail War possess known base parameters. The parameters of the containers has not been shown to affect summoned Servants, allowing for parameters higher and lower than those of the containers. They can however act in some cases as minor modifier to a certain parameter should the gap be vast. (Usually only upgrades them.)


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    Quote Originally Posted by Y View Post
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    Poor guy.

    Container Str End Agi Man Luk
    Saber A B B C D
    Archer C C C E E
    Lancer B C A D E
    Rider D D B C E
    Caster E E C A B
    Berserker C D D E E
    Assassin D D B E B

    Yeah.. the containers not gonna do much for him there either.
    Didn't know there were actual parameters for classes. In that case Cthulu would most likely be something else.

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